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CRITIQUE ME PLEASE

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Edit: so people can get a genera idea (though its half assed I sketched in a pretend ground) he's not flying...he's on the ground and its intended for him to be in the middle of a sharp turn. Hope this helps with that at least since a lot of you seemed to believe he was in the air. Also his wings are flightless and therefore size does not need to be large enough to carry him ^^

callistus...yeah sorta

requesting a critique now since i want to finish it but I want it to be all bad ass like when its done haha.

REQUESTING IN DEPTH CRITIQUE AND RED LINES ONLY! and while usually I want ot hear everything that is right seriously tear me apart guys. Be nice about it but if something looks wank tell me...get out your red crayons and draw all over it, tell me how to fix it. K thanks!

if you dont have a subscription dont let that stop you. Critique away critique away. And feel free to use your scraps to dump the redlines as a means to show me. I wont complain.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

i love the dynamic-ness of this picture! the few critiques that i have are thus...
<img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> the sword looks a little strange, but i do know that this is a difficult pose to master (I haven't done it yet! :&lt<img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)" />
<img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblack:" title="Bullet; Black" /> if this is a male, he has a VERY curvy waist, i HAVE been watching u for sometime and i know what ur men look like, but this one, i seriously thought it was a girl @ first....
<img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" title="Bullet; Red" /> i feel like there is something missing on HIS right shoulder....
all in all this picture is really well done, i really like the legs bee tee dubs!